Comments : The Swing

  • 6 years ago

    by Ocean Chant

    Sad to the heart, but prettily written

    • 6 years ago

      by SERA

      Thank you

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    This is great Sera! I can picture the scene perfectly as it's written. But the underlying 'swing' I feel is written more about a 'see-saw ' relationship? Either way, it's a fab write! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by SERA

      Thanks for the feedback!!
      I like idea of the rocky see saw x