by Lemon Squeezy Feb 16, 2018
category :
Life, society /
about society
Take me to the time of the folksong and the fiddle, |
by Alice rider
That was a great poem sur |
Absolutely superb. An excellent message of morality Oh for those times to come back again what a better world this would be. Best wishes Milly |
Excellent message so well brought across. Thank you for sharing. All the best |
by mossgirl19
I think you mean 'except the Lord's' on the third line of the second stanza. I love your message and the repetition of the title to establish rhythm. Wonderful! |
Thanks so much. And thanks for catching that, I changed it:) |