Comments : Vision

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    You made me read this a few times. Three lines holding such powerful meaning. Shortsighted means that you can't see far only what is close by. Where love is concerned I would like to believe it can be farsighted. I may be wrong. Thank you for sharing. Hugs my friend

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      How ever you see it Miss Dagmar, right or wrong in our game haha. and thank you :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Michael, this really is an inspired little piece of writing. I was about to get on my high horse and correct a 'typo' there at the end - 'lov' - alas, your horse was a little higher than mine...

    Well done, good fellow.

    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Ben :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Ren

    Beautiful write, as always, Michael! :)

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      thank you Miss Ren :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Hope

    I like the ending of the visionary haiku

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      thank you Hope :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Well done Michael short and powerful

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you marmite Em :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Sometimes the fewest of words speak more than the biggest volume. Best wishes Milly x

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Milly :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by MoonMaiden

    I couldn't agree more with Milly.. Truly amazing.