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  • 6 years ago

    by Robert Long

    This poem rhymes a lot with the same ending sound "e" like see, me, free and to me it makes it seem a bit bland however the emotions as usual and the imagery in this one makes that not matter

    good job with this one

    -Robert

    • 6 years ago

      by Khai Montegrande

      thanks Robert! Appreciate this..feel free to read and tell me what you think..thanks!