Awwww, so much longing in this. Well done-

I agree with Brenda, the longing is tangible! This is sad and sweet and very well written <3

Beautiful imagery of a moment in time ... I can picture the scene and your thoughts. Lovely! :-) x
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An emotional piece that captures wonderfully a moment in time where an emotional conflict finds an unresolved balance best wishes Milly x