Comments : Mine

  • 6 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    SC Short and sweet.
    Awesome rhymes.. well done

    • 6 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks USB, glad you like it :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    This is fantastic

    • 6 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Em, glad you like it and glad you're back too :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A lovely poem, Maher. It's always a joy to see something new posted by you.

    Take care, good fellow,

    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you, Mr Pickard. I'm glad you enjoyed it and even more so that you're back :)

      You take care too, good Sir.

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Awwwww Maher, such a sweet write! You gents are really piling up the swoon worthy works lately. Well done-

    • 6 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank ya ma'am I'm glad you like it. It's a conspiracy :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Such an old romantic Mr Mayer (well young haha)

    A stunning piece of writing, weaving your emotion of love throughout
    A beauty
    Michael :)

    • 6 years ago

      by Maher

      Haha thank you Mr Michael, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I am getting old I'm almost 30 as she says!

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I'm a real sucker for a romantic poem. This is so sweet and full of love. Best wishes Milly x

    • 6 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Milly, glad you like it :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Aw, swoony stuff Maher! A beautiful bit of romance :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank ya Cat Ma'am :)

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Ayeee...nice one, Ma! Loved it so much, it's going to my faves. Glad to read a new post from you.

    • 6 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Mel, glad you liked it :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Khai Montegrande

    BEAUTIFUL !!!

    • 6 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you, glad you liked it

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Wonderfully written. You've carefully rhymed alternately throughout this poem, gushing praised examples of love for your sweetheart.

    Super.

    • 6 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you, good Sir. Glad you enjoyed it :)