Comments : Misunderstood

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Crikey Walter! I've got tears in my eyes reading this :-( What a sad, sad story and a good reminder to not jump the gun and make assumptions ... we all do it though. A fabulous twisty tale :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Walter

      Thanks Kitty and yes, we have all been there. What might seem so obvious to us at the time is no where near the truth. (Sorry about the tears!) x

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Walter,

    this is a wonderful piece of rhyming poetry right through to the end, an incredible journey of so much sadness of betrayal and the consequences of such actions.
    Great piece my friend
    Michael :)

    • 6 years ago

      by Walter

      Thanks so much Michael...I'm really glad that you like it :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Walter this is amazing. The rhyming and flow and the sad tale with a twist. I just hope someone nominates this because I'm fresh out of votes. Very well done its not easy to keep the readers attention on the longer poems but this had me gripped from beginning to end. Best wishes Milly x

    • 6 years ago

      by Walter

      Thank you Milly and yes, I was a bit worried it was going to be too long but feel much better after reading your lovely comments! x

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Omg the build up and the complete story of is so very well portrayed and rhymed... I couldn't get enough if that makes sense and the fast pace of the whole piece in my eyes was like a fast heart beat

    • 6 years ago

      by Walter

      Thanks Em...and the fast pace is exactly what I was hoping for, as you said above :)