Comments : Kitchen scene

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Very very sweet Walter, although I think at that point I'd have said 'sod the dishes!' Lol.
    I can picture the scene perfectly and your rhyming and flow are flawless :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Walter

      Thank you kindly Kitty and in reality yes! Lol...I don't think it would ever go this way. Still, I was trying to make a point that she was more important than any of my wants! x

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Amazing job, Walter!

    • 6 years ago

      by Walter

      Thanks very much Mel :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Walter,

    A sweet and romantic piece... and would have to agree with Kitty (lady's advice always worth noting :)
    Nicely penned, well done
    Michael :)

    • 6 years ago

      by Walter

      Thanks Michael and agreed...A woman's perspective is always important :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Lost One

    This is heartwarming. Flawless rhyming with a beautiful messege.

    • 6 years ago

      by Walter

      Thank you Tony...I appreciate your comments.

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Walter one word stunning

    • 6 years ago

      by Walter

      Thanks so much Em

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    So sweetly romantic Walter....you got 4 stars from.me for doing the dishes lol...seriously, this was really done well.

    • 6 years ago

      by Walter

      Thanks Brenda...and yes, doing the dishes always seems to earn brownie points!

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    For a minute I thought it was going somewhere and
    then...poof! A gentleman who helps out with the chores
    does it so romantically now that deserves more then a star!
    Liked the read..keep penning

  • 6 years ago

    by Walter

    Thanks Meena, your comment put a smile on my face :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Judging comments:
    Well. Take note fellas! I’m going to hazard a guess that Walter is an EXTREMELY happily married man – lol. This flawlessly rhymed vignette of an everyday domestic scene is blissful and hard to achieve in the usual humdrum of daily life. Whether fact or fiction, the thought behind the poem reveals a very sweet nature. Well done. :-) x
    =^.^=