Whatever we are going through mentally or emotionally it does define who we are. You are who you are and I certainly enjoyed reading. All the best |
by Ben Pickard
I often look back at past poems, Jason, and wonder where it all stemmed from. I suppose without that 'mental debris' we sometimes struggle for inspiration but if this piece here is anything to go by, you don't struggle with that affliction just yet. |
by jason
Thank you, I hope I can make more that people enjoy. |
by Brenda
Jason, I really liked this a lot. I look.back on some of my stuff and it brings me to that time, sometimes so vividly are the emotions I have to step back. Well done with this. |
by Michael
Jason, |
Jason, I doubt there's anyone on this site that can't relate to this poem. Sometimes when I read previous stuff I think ... "where on earth did that come from!", but also ... it's often journal-like. I love how you've expressed this familiar feeling here. Great! :-) x |
by jason
Thank you for reading it, and I am glad you enjoyed it. |