Comments : My Definition Of Happiness

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    This feels like a real journey of self-discovery Hales, and I totally get the 'massiveness of the sea' thing ... it helps put things into perspective. Great imagery an enjoyable read indeed! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Bleu

      Thank you so much! <3 I am glad that you enjoyed it!

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    This is stunning

    • 6 years ago

      by Bleu

      Thank you!

  • 6 years ago

    by Lost One

    A very warm welcome to the site, and wow. The last stanza was amazing. Very Lovecraftian. I'm a huge fan of rhyming poetry and this does not disappoint.

    • 6 years ago

      by Bleu

      Thank you so much, Tony!! I am just getting back onto the site. I was a member a few years ago and had well over 300 poems but was unable to log into it, so I had to start over. Lol. <3 I am so glad that you enjoyed it!!

    • 6 years ago

      by Lost One

      Don't feel too bad, my old account got deleted. I was on in 08, no idea what happened

    • 6 years ago

      by Bleu

      Is your old page still up?? I know after being inactive for 3 months, it says it will delete your page, but mine is still up and I can see all of the poems even after 3 years