I see you in the sun

by Beautiful Tragedy   Mar 1, 2018


I’ve never seen you in the moon;
But I always see you in the sun.
You see;
the sun shines just about as bright as your smile does,
And it always paints me in the golden energy that you always have.
I see the drive and determination of you in it;
The way it never fails to rise each and everyday no matter what’s going on in the world.
The fire around it keeps me warm;
And on my darkest days it’s the light that breaks through the cracks in my bedroom window blinds-
Always reminding me that everyday has something beautiful in it,
Even if sometimes the only beautiful thing I can find about the world
Is you.
I’ve never seen you in the moon;
It’s surrounded by way too much darkness for my liking.
But I’ve always seen you in the sun.

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  • 6 years ago

    by Ren

    "Even if sometimes the only beautiful thing I can find about the world
    Is you."
    ^^
    Awwwww!! <3

    Such an incredibly sweet and loving write! Well done!! :)

    • 6 years ago

      by Beautiful Tragedy

      I was waiting for someone to comment on that line!! Lol. Thank you

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    aw ... this is so swoony BT :-) I love how you describe HOW your love affects you ...

    "And it always paints me in the golden energy that you always have"
    ^^
    This really highlights that lovely feeling of seeing ourselves through the love of someone else, a wonderful feeling. Beautiful write! :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Very beautiful poem dedicated to someone dear to you. I loved the last stanza.

  • 6 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Ohhh this is beautiful....reminds me of my bird...just beautiful

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