I have never read one of these and it was a pleasure to do so. There's not enough formed poetry tried these days, in my humble opinion. Excellent stuff.

All the best to you,

Ben

Well ... I learn something new every day and now I know what a Balassi is - so thanks for sharing Nee :-)

The structure aside ... I love your language here and the tale of the troubled poet. Lovely! :-) x
=^.^=

Beautiful

Beautiful piece, and very well written :)

Nee,

A great piece of writing, and in a style I haven't come across.
Well done
Michael :)

Oh my word.. That is all!

Nee, If you keep on writing like this, I never want the ink of your pen to get dry. Keep on penning