This is just..... powerful!

Wow! I am blown away! Your write hooked me from the start and knocked me over-well done-

Damn. I agree. Super powerful write! I was not expecting that at all.

Judging comment:

Sarcasm at its best. My only problem here is the awkward punctuation and capitalization of several words in each stanza. Other than that, what is tackled here is super smart and neat. Beneath society’s glimmering façade, the human soul rots in lies as we set rules and expectations to senseless things, whilst forgetting and even demolishing the meaning. Beautiful.