by Walter
Kitty, this is a sad but beautiful write and I'm crossing all my fingers for your wish to come true |
Toes too please Walter ;-) thanks so much :-) x |
by Lost One
It's strength is in its roots... too true. Well rhymed and beautiful messege. |
Thanks so much Tony :-) x |
by Paul Hirst
Great poem simple and yet the duel meaning is very clear x |
Thanks so much Paul :-) x |
by Em (marmite)
Love this KCL x |
Thanks lovely Em xx |
by Brenda
Miss Kitty, I just love this. Yes, it is a weed but it has beauty in its own way and it's sturdy and stubborn. Sounds a lot like you, you can do this! You will bloom, again and again. You will set down roots and flourish. I'm that same weed, set adrift but landed and grew all over again. Hugs - |
lol ... thanks lovely Brenda ... I'm happy to be the weed with fluffy bits ... hahaha ;-) xx |
by Ya----Na
Kitty, if there is a word in any dictionary which means better than better you deserve that. Every single wish of yours come true and your rhyming, your poems are as usual phenomenal. |
Aw, thanks so much Shane, such lovely comments! :-) x |
by C Cattaway
I saw the beauty of the wish, amongst the determination of the weed. |
Wonderfully put, thanks so much Catherine :-) x |
by Ren
Oh gosh, I didn't realize how much I needed to read this until I did...and now my eyes are watering and my heart is aching. What a sweet, beautiful write!! Reminds me of my childhood, when I used to make wishes on dandelions and blow them into the wind. I remember so clearly watching that fluff floating away, hoping with all of my heart they would let the sky know about my dreams <3 Okay, I'll stop rambling before this comment gets way too long, but it just struck a nostalgic chord in me, lol. I absolutely love this, and I hope all your wishes have been heard loud and clear!! Keep your eyes on the horizon and watch them unfold :) |
Aw Ren, I love your rambling! Thank you so much for your wonderful comments ;-) x |