I love the repetition in this as well as the comparisons . a lovely peice with such open emotion .

Powerfully graphic and bloody and painful, just like a broken heart feels. Well done on a beautiful yet sad write.

Its raw and vivid! The reader along with the writer
spirals into this scene and feels every inch and pain of
love and love lost, like been pushed from the height
of joy to the depths of sadness...

A painful experience nicely penned...take care

Well PM, this is fab! The poem reminds me of the title of a book I love called "love and other near death experiences" ... the way you've so vividly described the broken heart is brilliant, and you've made the point about it feeling like a physical injury perfectly. A fantastic write! :-) x
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