You babe

by Beautiful Tragedy   Mar 15, 2018


Puzzles-
Puzzles are a funny thing.
They have so many tiny pieces with weird curvy edges and it takes a lot of time
and concentration to finish them;
To make them into the masterpiece that you know they can become
if you put in the right amount of work.
The picture it creates is almost always beautiful;
And it’s an adventure in its own
way to try to figure out which pieces go where.
And once you finally get all the pieces fitted together and in order;
And you only have one piece to put in
do you ever notice how the picture is still quite amazing but-
Without that last piece it never looks quite complete?
Well-
My life is a puzzle...
and you babe-
You are the piece that completes it.

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  • 6 years ago

    by Phoenix ¥

    I love puzzles and loved this poem - thank you x

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Brilliant concept BT, written in your trademark conversational tone that takes us with you through your thoughts. Fab stuff! :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Lost One

    You have a talent for drawing the reader in to the narrative you weave with simple and relatable topics, but portrayed as an extended metaphor that, more often than not, makes me smile at the end.

    I'm sitting here reading about puzzles and how they relate to my life, and then the the last three lines hit home and here Tony is- in stunned silence in his car about to go into work.

    Seriously. Well done.

    • 6 years ago

      by Beautiful Tragedy

      Awe tony hahaha. Thank you so much, I’m so glad my writing has a good effect on people. :)

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