Enjoyed this Timothy, like how you made the rhyme seem unforced.

As Mark says, the rhyming is well done but it was the content that stood out for me. Sad but all so very true.

Take care,

Ben

A fabulous thought provoking piece full of sad truths

Very thought provoking Timothy, and it feels like the natural order of things, but people only grieve people that have been loved. I hope we see more of you here :-) x
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