by Dreamofolwin
love your poem. So glad I stopped by to read. So well written and expressed, Very well done! :) |
Aw Olwin! It's nice to meet you and thanks so much for your lovely comments and for your nomination. I really appreciate it :-) x |
by Ben Pickard
Kitty, this is excellent. Promises made are promises too often broken... |
Thanks so much Ben :-) x |
by Michael
Miss Kitty, |
Indeed Michael :-) Thanks so much :-) x |
by Brenda
A lovely write Miss Kitty . Sometimes it's over promise and under deliver. Resulting in bitter feelings and sadness. Well done- |
Yes. Must be a hard situation to be caught up in! Thanks so much Brenda :-) x |
by Walter
Beautiful words Kitty and yes, sometimes the 'here and now' is the only place that these situations can exist in :) x |
Aw thanks so much Walter :-) x |
by Phoenix ¥
I love this poem Kitty and can relate to every word... it’s a painful situation that I’m very familiar with, thanks for articulating it so well in this poem x |
Sorry to hear you can relate Phoenix. Thanks for your lovely comments :-) x |
by Em (marmite)
Hey kitty I like this piece, your rhyming as ever is pretty amazing and unforced, it just flows like water from a water fountain (unless of course the fall dries up lol) |
Thanks lovely Em for your amazing comments. I got all a bit sentimental listening to the radio :-) I'm so glad you enjoyed it xx |