by Lost One
My biggest critique would be my desire to keep it going. This struck a chord in my mind and drew me in. I've lived it. I love this. Well done! |
by Walter
Thanks Tony for reading and your comment...appreciated! |
Ouch Walter! The pain of watching someone you care for, waiting to be used, is so well expressed here. This could be written from the perspective of so many people to whom it's obvious she's being used by him and knowing she deserves better. Really well done :-) x |
by Walter
You're right Kitty I guess it's hard for some to move on and to ignore the obvious as you say. Thanks for your lovely comment! :) |
by Em (marmite)
Like Tony I have lived through this to watch someone I cared for dearly be used, heartbroken then getting back with said heartbreaker but all we can do is advise and be there to pick up the pieces in my opinion. |
by Walter
Em! Thank you so much for your detailed and spot on analysis of my poem! I truly appreciate your time to read and comment for each stanza to the extent that you have and you couldn’t have said it any better for the message I was hoping to convey. :) x |