Abed this is great! And it's true, if no one is listening the words are insignificant and the truth gets lost. |
by Sunshine
Excuse my short comment, but this is a great piece, I think the last stanza could have a stronger impact if you replace one of the 2 enoughs by a different word. I loved the poem a lot. Nominated |
Coming back to read this again. I feel that tired aspect in this poem, that we try and try to use our words to move forward, yet do we get anywhere? Do words lose meaning over time? Do we overcompensate in order to tell ourselves we're really making a difference with our speech? |
by Abed
Wow MaryAnne, you've not only captured the point of the piece with the interpretation but also added dramatically to it. |
by Nee
I love your ending stanza! This is so simple yet truly deep. Good job, Abed! |
by gumshuda
beautiful! |