by naaz Mar 19, 2018
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
The caged bird is now |
A beautiful tribute. Perfectly penned. Great job on the Haiku and for receiving an HM! |
This is amazing, I love it so much :) |
by Meena Krish
There is a picture and you have |
Really loved it....so much expressed with such few words :) |
by Em (marmite)
Judging Comment - Black hole (haiku) by naaz points 7 - personally I feel that haikus/senryus do not get the recognition they deserve because they're such short pieces but this piece by naaz said quite alot in such a limited word count.. The image is one which feels me with a little hope yet saddens me as Stephen Hawking's was ‘a caged bird’ around these part but since he's passed over, I believe that he will have ‘found his lost nest’ and now he can be one with the earth/galaxy he studied so much without any limitations in my eyes. Powerful short piece |