by Jamie
A lot of times the most simplistic poem are the best ones and this one is really good in my opinion. I really love how you used couplets here because it makes the flow and rhyming work well. |
by Phoenix ¥
Wow Jamie thanks for such a detailed comment on my poem. I’m so pleased you appreciated it and value your comments. I agree with leaving things to the reader’s imagination and also allowing them to project their own similar thoughts or feelings into the poem. |
by Em (marmite)
This is so sweet and simple that it made me smile a lot |
by Phoenix ¥
Thanks Em x |
It's amazing how loves embrace can heal the deepest of wounds, well penned! |
by Phoenix ¥
Thanks very much x |