Comments : You are My Heaven and Hell

  • 6 years ago

    by Phoenix ¥

    Really liked your poem and could relate to slot of the content. Being torn by conflicting emotions- it’s painful.
    Take care x

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    A piece of writing that reflects your emotions, which tells of the struggles within a relationship. A decision that states it all at the end with the last two lines.
    Nicely put together, albeit threaded with love being tough.
    M:)