by Maple Tree Mar 21, 2018
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Aching souls scatter |
by Em (marmite)
Judging Comment - Angelic (acrostic) by maple tree points 4 - This form like many others is not usually recognised but I think they should be especially when done so well because in my opinion acrostics are hard to write well let alone rhymed and maple did a fantastic job with both and told a somewhat tragic story in the process, hats off to you |
by Ya----Na
Andrea, I just want to say that very few of us are gifted with poetry. You are one of them, my dear friend. |
by Ben Pickard
Now this is how to write an acrostic! Well done, Maple - thoroughly enjoyed. |
by Brenda
Andrea, I just love this acrostic. It gives another twist to the word angelic. It really is a beautiful piece. |
City of angels, indeed. |