A sad piece, but excellently...well, executed!

Take care, Kitty.

Great poem Kitty - taking the reader in a story with a most definite ending. Really enjoyed it xx

Lovely words Kitty, they had me caught in your web. Beautiful write x

What a fantastic piece we'll done kitty

Kitty, this is an amazing piece of poetry! Loved how it flowed.
I just love your opening stanza so much. It's very clever of you to have chosen it to be the first. Very captivating!

Well done love :) <3

Brilliant Miss Kitty, and woven from your poetic skills, albeit a sad piece.
Much love
Michael :)x

Brilliant, Kitty.
Well done,
Catherine x

Unfortunately it is all too often that love does feel like a silken trap. This poem certainly captures the idea of feeling betrayed at the promise of a real relationship.

Well done!