Comments : A cliche state of mind-metaphorically speaking

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    All wonderful lines Michael!
    'My headroom is suffocated'
    'I need a smaller space with larger exits.'

    And I empathise too. Great one!

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mark :)

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Perhaps I read to much into this and perhaps not but on a certain level it totally resonates

    Great effort

    Craig

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      thanks fella, its however much you want to read into :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Totally relatable write Michael. Love needing more exits, so many of us are right there. Well done my friend -

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Brenda, lovely words :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    I read it questioned, by whether we can truly escape. I like the way you've written it.
    Well done,
    Catherine x

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Michael I love how you're able to write a piece that will have a different interpretation to each reader. Very clever indeed and too many excellent lines within this to quote my favourites to you. Just fab! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Ah thank you Miss Kitty, that really is a lovely comment :)x