Comments : All I’ve got

  • 6 years ago

    by Yan

    Phoenix this poem is so lovely. Well it starts with scene setting that is terrifyingly sad but the last part is so warm and comforting, it's beautiful.

    Hold on to all you've got because even thou it might not sound like a lot it seems like it has great value and very precious.

    Take good care X

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Reflecting, contemplating the aftermath and considering the next move.

    We have all been there, the myriad of emotions and confusion of what comes next. At times like these, we hold onto light, shielding it like flame of promise.

    Take care.

    • 6 years ago

      by Phoenix ¥

      Thank you Mr Darcy a very insightful and inspiring comment x

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Love can bring such pleasure...but such terrible misery as well.

    Well written and all the best,

    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by Phoenix ¥

      Seems you can’t have one without the other. Thanks Ben x

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Sometimes you have to let go to find the new ... easier said than done I know, and I feel your pain through your words Phoenix. :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Phoenix ¥

      Thanks for your lovely comment Kitty x

  • 6 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    I agree with Kitty. Letting go is just the beginning, but it's the first step.
    Lovely write. Well done.
    Catherine x

    • 6 years ago

      by Phoenix ¥

      Thanks for the lovely comment Catherine x