Comments : Pieces

  • 6 years ago

    by Phoenix ¥

    Well rhymed Matt x

    • 6 years ago

      by Matt Carroll

      Thank you! Just one of those random thoughts I had that I decided to write down.

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Great flow in the 1st verse, Matt. May I offer a suggestion for the last line - I feel this may help with the flow:

    "as another piece of me just dies"

    Take care

    • 6 years ago

      by Matt Carroll

      Thank you for your comment, and the suggestion!