I’m not that breeze

by Everlasting   Apr 5, 2018


And if by chance,
you thought I was that breeze
that came to whisper in your ear
just know, it wasn’t me, my dear.

I was the sound that breeze produced
the one you loved and deeply felt
who made goosebumps in your skin
and your heart skip a beat

so if by chance, you look for me
just know I’m not that breeze

I am that sound that quickly disappeared.

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  • 6 years ago

    by MoonMaiden

    This is truly a lovely peice.

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Luce this is beautifully sad. I have no words

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I like this, Luce.

    Like a plane flying supersonic - when you look for the sound, too late, the plane has flown by. I guess, if you don't appreciate what you have in the moment, it's too late. There ain't no repeat show here, my dear!

  • 6 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    I have just broke up with my ex. So it's like you wrote about her because she quickly disappeared

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ooh, this made me a bit goosebumpy even though I can't claim to fully understand it. There's an ethereal quality to it that speaks of delicacy ... it whispers in and back out again. Wonderful! :-) x
    =^.^=

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