by Kitty Cat Lady Apr 6, 2018
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Tell it to the wind |
I would have also nominated this superb piece. The visuals and subtle rhyming are excellent. Another example of your enduring talent. Definitely one for my favourites list. Milly x |
Aw, thanks lovely lady xx |
by Ya----Na
Kitty , But the wind has already reached our hearts and telling to read your words again and again. |
Aw sweet! Thanks Shane :-) x |
by Michael
Miss Kitty just brilliant, and away from your normal rhyming, shows other little hidden talent |
Hey Michael :-) Thanks so much lovely man :-) x |
by Em (marmite)
Kcl.. I absolutely love this visuals here and the rhyming scheme too, it was done really well so I didn't even notice the rhyming until I saw your comment which in experience is a good thing as you can tell it isn't forced and is fluent. |
Wow Em! Thank you so much for your fantastic, in-depth comment. You've absolutely hit the nail on the head and understood exactly what I was conveying ... a bit like "yeah, yeah ... I've heard it all before ... talk to the hand!" ... lol |
by Mr. Darcy
Tell it to the wind |
Thanks so much Michael ... I like your revision and it's a good version too :-) I was trying to get away from my usual rhyming scheme a little bit by only rhyming the last words of each stanza with each other, I wouldn't want to be accused of getting stuck in a rhyming rut (lol, I totally am though!) :-) x |