Comments : Remedy

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Great question:

    What to do when a heart is broken
    and the shards don't match what they used to be?
    ^
    Like a damaged porcelain bowl - once its been broken, the pieces don't fit back the same. The sound when you 'ring' it sounds like dud note.

    Great lyrics.

    • 6 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks my friend, glad it resonated with you

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Maher

    A great piece of writing my friend, along with some great imagery.
    Nice one fella
    Michael :)

    • 6 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks my friend, glad you enjoyed it

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    Great write! Nominated

    • 6 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks, glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the nomination also

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    I read this before and loved it, but just realised I hadn't left a comment! I found this beautiful and poignant and I'm glad it's nominated :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks cat ma'am, glad you enjoyed it

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    I could imagine this would being a eerie song/story of why I'm not sure but fantastic job as always

    • 6 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Em, glad you enjoyed it. It is kind of eerie

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Maher, I always love your pieces! This is amazing and flows beautifully. Well done!

    • 6 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Brenda, really glad you like it!