by Brise Apr 9, 2018
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
I apologize to you for my careless youth |
by Maher
Beautiful, sad and honest. It really hits home as I've been on the receiving end of this. Would be nice if that man apologised to me like this about my woman. Better yet, if my woman at least tried to :/ |
Wow this is amazing! I loved that you shared this even though most people would say keep it to yourself. What's really beautiful about this is that you learned from that situation. Great job! |
by Brise
Thank you flawed diamond! It was a personal poem and I'm glad you enjoyed reading it, it makes worth sharing :) |
by Ya----Na
Never read something like this before. It's you, with such a unique theme to write about and me, I have no creativity left besides love. I will try to write in different themes. To be as creative as you, if possible. |
by Brise
Thank you Sinners gospel !! And you write beautifully, love is the best theme to write about, I wish I wrote like you :) |
Brilliant Brise and I echo what's already been said. But remember also that it takes two to tango. You didn't become the 'other woman' all by yourself, he was there too. Well done for such a brave and revealing write :-) x |
by Brise
Thank you Kitty :) I always appreciate your critique !! |
by Brenda
Wow! A strong heartfelt write that not many would have the courage to stand up and admit to. Well done with this - |
by Brise
It was a difficult poem to write, thank you Brenda! :) |