Comments : Waiting for You (Rondeau)

  • 6 years ago

    by Lost One

    Anytime Kit-Cat. You got the meter and rhyme scheme spot on. Line five still lacks a subject I think? I wish there was a way you could incorporate yourself in there, "me to have and hold" but I can't figure it out.

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      I know, right? Lol. Next time eh :-) Thanks so much Tony :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Well done on this, Kitty - a really fine poem and a very hard form.

    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Yeah, I'm pleased with it :-) Thanks Ben :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Hi kitty, (Tony Hellon and Mr Darcy)
    they just polished it to look more beautiful, but it was your who wrote this beautiful gem. I will give it a try too, sometimes later.

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Aw thanks Shane, it was good to try something new :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hi Kitty,

    It was great watching you shape this poem into shape. It reads like the song it was always meant to be.

    Well done x

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks Michael, and for your help, you were great! :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Hellon

    Kitty...I know you struggled with this form and it took you way out of your comfort zone but...look where it finally took you...your first Rondeau!!! Well done girl!!!

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      aw thanks Hellon ... it's a fantastic thread you started and I'm really proud that I did it! Thanks for your help :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Fab! Miss Kitty, I love this and a great effort that was certainly a chellenge

    Much love
    Michael :)x