Comments : What If?

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    This gave me a really heavy heart..

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Oh Miss Kitty, I wasn't sure which way this was going, I was turned around at the end, so sad.

  • 6 years ago

    by Phoenix ¥

    What a clever poem thy starts off so bright and yet ends in a tragedy. It describes so well how the uncontrollable hand of fate actually dictates all our lives and the choices we unwittingly take can change our lives forever.
    Really well written and enjoyable xx

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      They were exactly my thoughts when I was writing it Phoenix. Thanks so much :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Miss Kitty

    This is a piece I didn't see coming, good job fate did! Such a great write and story..
    Miss clever :)
    Much love
    Michael x