by Michael
very good Phoenix |
by Phoenix ¥
Thanks for your comment Michael- I agree words only get you far ;-) |
Sounds like he can talk the talk but not much else. Your frustration is so clear Phoenix. Well expressed indeed! :-) x |
by Phoenix ¥
He he thinks Kitty - nice to get some of that frustration out in a poem. |
by Brenda
Nicely done, good rhyming throughout. Actions do speak louder than words. I hope this person steps up and becomes the person they need to be, not just talk-talk. |
by Phoenix ¥
Thanks Brenda, I hope so too. Thanks for commenting x |
by Mr. Darcy
what are words when they are not backed up with actions? |
by Phoenix ¥
Wise words Mr Darcy.. and you’re so right about a pattern...it soon forms. |
by Brise
I love your rhyming it highlights the flow of the poem. The second stanza is my favorite. Can't wait to read your next poem! :) |
by Phoenix ¥
Thanks for your lovely comment Brise xx |
by Meena Krish
You have given this line: Actions speak louder than words a heartfelt |
by Phoenix ¥
Thanks Meena x |
very good poem |
by Phoenix ¥
Thanks Gianna x |