Comments : Actions speak louder than words

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    very good Phoenix

    Cant be any different, actions - they will always be the only way to really show :)

    Michael

    • 6 years ago

      by Phoenix ¥

      Thanks for your comment Michael- I agree words only get you far ;-)

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Sounds like he can talk the talk but not much else. Your frustration is so clear Phoenix. Well expressed indeed! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Phoenix ¥

      He he thinks Kitty - nice to get some of that frustration out in a poem.
      Best wishes xx

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Nicely done, good rhyming throughout. Actions do speak louder than words. I hope this person steps up and becomes the person they need to be, not just talk-talk.

    • 6 years ago

      by Phoenix ¥

      Thanks Brenda, I hope so too. Thanks for commenting x

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    what are words when they are not backed up with actions?

    The trouble when this becomes a pattern trust and respect break down. Love, like concrete can withstand so much, but under enough pressure, it will crack in two.

    • 6 years ago

      by Phoenix ¥

      Wise words Mr Darcy.. and you’re so right about a pattern...it soon forms.
      Thanks for commenting x

  • 6 years ago

    by Brise

    I love your rhyming it highlights the flow of the poem. The second stanza is my favorite. Can't wait to read your next poem! :)

    • 6 years ago

      by Phoenix ¥

      Thanks for your lovely comment Brise xx

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    You have given this line: Actions speak louder than words a heartfelt
    truth. Sometimes actions are good but when they turn negative as its penned
    in your write...then that itself hurts more. Nicely done...take care ~

  • 6 years ago

    by Gianna Daniels

    very good poem