Comments : my love to gain (A risky Rondeau) -vous

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Michael, great minds think and act alike.

    I love the refrain and the language you've used; it really suits this dark theme.

    Good luck

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mr D. Challenged for sure :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, nicely done my friend! I really like the whole tone you put on this. Super cool-

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Brenda :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Hellon

    I love the tone of this Rondeau Michael and I'm glad you gave it another shot. Can you just check lines 10 and 11 as I'm only counting 7 beats in each?

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Hellon and now adjusted :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Love this Michael! I felt mine ended up a little forced when I revised it for the meter, but yours just flows beautifully. Fab stuff! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty, such nice words. This was such a challenge, I will say :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Attempting a rondeau is a risky thing, but it looks like you love to take risks. True beauty, Michael.

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you SG :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    Beautiful Michael!