by Michael
Wow! Hellon this is cool formed piece of writing |
by Ya----Na
Hellon, Very beautiful poem |
by Ben Pickard
Very clever stuff, Hellon. I have to say, the imagery and poetry certainly never suffers for the sake of the form here - it's beautifully done. |
by Brenda
Very cool Hellon! Nicely done and flows beautifully. |
by Mr. Darcy
You have made this form look easy, and it is not! |
by Em (marmite)
This is amazing |
Having just done one of these I can appreciate the difficulty, and as the others have said, you've made it seem effortless Hellon! :-) x |
by mossgirl19
Very enchanting! Wow, a great example of a palindrome. |
by Ben Pickard
Well done, Hellon. |
by Ya----Na
Congrats Hellon |
by mossgirl19
Congrats, Hellon! |
by Mark
Congrats!! |
by yogi73
Very clever. So quaint of full visions |
Judging comment: |
by Em (marmite)
Judging Comment - Dancing Rainbows (Palidrome) by Hellon points 7 - this was one of the main poems this week which has been stuck in my head and I have read over and over again. The imagery, infact the whole piece, is sublime. |