Is crazy bad (Etheree acrostic palindrome)

by Darren   Apr 13, 2018


I'm
So-So
Can't love, can't
Rare smiles, smiles? Rare
Almost sane ...................almost
Zest lost........... again,.......... lost zest
Yearning love..........I............ love yearning
Beat myself...... daily, myself?................beat
Always wanting more ...........wanting?.........always
Destiny?...........why?...Screaming .........."why destiny?"
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  • 6 years ago

    by Jamie

    I am probably only one of a few members here that remembers when you used to play around with different types of forms at once. it seems like years ago now but I am glad you are back at it again. I have always admired your poetry because you are a unique voice. Keep writing!

    • 6 years ago

      by Darren

      Thanks mate sorry I missed this comment

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Jeez Darren, talk about upping the ante....lol... Not only did you do a Palindrome (hard enough) but threw in an acrostic and an Ethereee! Seriously! You slay me! Well done good man, well done!

    • 6 years ago

      by Darren

      Thanks Brenda.

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Mind simply blown

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    This, I know would have been a lot of editing to mould this into the correct shape and form.

    Well done.

    • 6 years ago

      by Darren

      Thanks Micheal

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Now you're showing off...

    • 6 years ago

      by Darren

      thanks mate, just playing around.

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