Michael, I have just written my first etheree but it is a 'standard' one and certainly doesn't rhyme! Here, you have a double etheree that does - superb. The only thing I might point out is that the two last lines both have ten syllables, I believe, and the penultimate one should have nine. (scrap my advice if it's wrong)!

Anyway, this is great.

Ben

Oh I do say what a beautifully sad etheree and a rhymed one too just wow where do your talents stop??
Line 9 has 10 syllables I suggest taking out my on this line.
Take care. Em x

Michael, this is your first Etheree? Seriously? You did a double with rhyming! You have many hidden talents my friend! Nicely done!

Your cup runneth over Michael! Lol ... this is visually lovely, content and rhymes are fab and adheres to the form! *applause!* blooming well done. I suppose I'll have to try one now! Lol :-) x
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Visually and literally beautiful