Comments : Taking Stock (Etheree)

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    That end line.... Broke me

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Aw, sorry again Em, lol xx
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      *edit ... thanks so much for the nomination lovely lady :-) xx

  • 6 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    What a quote you wrote to give this etheree such a good end. Kitty, you are so good with the new things. I loved this etheree.

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks so much Shane, lovely comments :-) x
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  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Brilliant Miss Kitty, a fine effort and great piece of formed

    Much love
    Michael :)x

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks Michael ... I was itching to make it rhyme ... next time :-) x
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  • 6 years ago

    by Brise

    Amazing Kitty, the metaphor you use of love and money is frighteningly real. Love reading your poems!

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      aw, thanks so much Brise , lovely comment! :-) x
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  • 6 years ago

    by Hellon

    Kitty..at the moment (for me anyway) it just sounds very stilted..like a whole bunch of sentences

    Love
    is not
    ever free,
    it has a price.
    To get you must give
    when only one invests
    and the other only spends
    then you'll always be in the red
    paying with credit and overdrawn
    love is the currency, tears are the debt.

    That's how I think it should read..

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks Hellon, that totally makes sense with the capital letters. I'll change it now :-) x
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  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I've always found shaped poetry fascinating. Shapes to play with. Words to shape and mold into mind images and visual art.

    Your poem starts off with the word; Love. This sitting up the top of your word pyramid is symbolic to its importance, right? Like a previous comment, I like the currency metaphor. People say, "the best things in life are free", but that's not true, is it...

    Lovely Etheree, Kitty. X

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Exactly. Love isn't free and the cost is to give back. It's the only way it works.

      I keep meaning to explore shaped poetry some more, it does look pretty!

      Thanks for your comments Mr D :-) x
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