Season of love

by Ya----Na   Apr 17, 2018


The season of love
has come once again.
This sky looks so beautiful
in colors of your name.

The tree of life is
blooming in your presence - my Hun.
Its branches are adorned with
the fruits of your return.

The bird of happiness
which migrated from my heart,
it has returned with your fragrance;
Now, sadness will depart.

The snow of pain will melt
when your lips dip into mine.
The Bridge of our promises
won't fall this time.

Throwing away our past
into the river of forever,
we will move to
the island of our dreams together.

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  • 6 years ago

    by naaz

    I guess as long as you are present on this site, good or bad, there will always be a season of love.

    Once again, written with simplicity, not much metaphors.
    Full points for the rhyming and the flow and the language is just beautiful.
    To be honest, I loved this poem more than your poems with metaphors.
    It starts, it ends and leaves a smile on the face of the reader.

    The poem sounds like there was a distance in relationship which is going to end. All the differences between you and your lover are going to end.

    She has come, and everything in your world would cover in the color of love. In this season, your life which was wilting had bloomed once again; every aspect of your life is fruitful now.

    There is eternal happiness in your life and her presence pushed away the rotting smell of sadness from your heart. Love Birds are singing those songs which you almost forgot.

    A kiss from her has healed all the scars which were aching in your heart for so long because this time the bond between the two of you going to last forever. There is nothing left between the two of you and a bridge or a connection established between the souls.

    The two of you wants to move on with each other to the wonderland or dreamland by forgetting your past or by forgiving each other mistakes.
    That's all!

    Language is Short, sweet and cute and theme is pretty obvious from the title 'love'.

    Keep on penning!

    • 6 years ago

      by Ya----Na

      Thank you so much little brother.
      Your comments are the ones which are sweet and cute. You always bring smile on my face.

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    I can almost feel the sun shining on as you bask in loves warm glow Shane. Beautiful! :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Heart-melting!

    • 6 years ago

      by Ya----Na

      Thank you so much, Michael, em, Brenda, brise and purvi. Much appreciated your kind words.

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    This melted my heart...

  • 6 years ago

    by Brise

    Wow this is beautiful. The more poems I read from you, the more I notice how much I need to improve lol cant wait to read your next work :)

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