Battles within (Tyburn)

by Michael   Apr 17, 2018


scrounging
hounding
pounding
fowling
Demons come in scrounging, hounding me
I will fight their pounding, fowling spree

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  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I've always wondered how to do this form have tried most of them
    and this is one of the few which needs to be tried. As for the write itself
    you have chosen your words well to bring out that feeling and the struggles
    of a battle within oneself...good job!

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Meena, easier read, than written for sure :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Superb. I love this form but I haven't tried one yet. Maybe I'll give it a go later.

    Take care, Michael

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Ben, yes you should :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    This is great Michael and works perfectly with the form, I can really feel the demons! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty, oust those demons! haha :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Like I mentioned to Darren, this form is tricky. It looks easy, but it is not! Your Tyburn is dark and has energy - it must have been exhilaration of completing the task.

    Well done.

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mr D it certainly looks easier than to write :)

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