Sorrounded.

I love this peice, very much so. Don't have anything negative to say, honestly.

"Here I stand,
Sorrounded by everything,
Thoughts, feelings, family, friends.
But nothing. But no one.
Just the darkness that resides deep within me."

..this portion really hit home with me, which in my opinion, makes the read better. Well written & greatly detailed.
Excellent work.

Considering this is your first poem, it really is special. I seem to recall my first attempt was a, roses are red type effort - so well done.

Your poem resonated with me and I am sure will do with others too. Standing in a room full of people and feeling alone/ feeling out-of-place, like an imposter. I mean, how can others know what you are feeling/ coping with?

Inside a whirlwind of emotions, memories strike, returning their pain, just like lightening strikes, right?

Overall, a good poem that mostly shows the reader emotions, rather than telling them.

I would advise a little editing here and there, just to condense the idea. Also, this would uniform the text, so it presents as a tidier poem.

Great first poem - I look forward to reading more from you.

This is your first? Nicely done! I too look forward to reading more from you. Welcome to P&Q!

hey! If this is your first attempt of writing a poem, than you have a great future on this site!! Its a raw write but you can say so much more if you refine it...
Keep on writing bro..
You really dont have to comment on my stuff because i truly dont care what ppl have to say... I write what i want to write for only One.. just like to post it her and there...