Brilliantly clever poem, seamlessly leading from the highs to the lows, just as quickly as can happen in life. Thank you xx

Kitty there was a time when people underestimated you by saying that you were restricted to rhyme scheme only. It's good to see you are replying them back slowly and steady week after week. Very well written.

I keep promising myself I will write one of these...
Excellent, Kitty.

Take care

Miss Kitty,

Ah a new formed poem, how interesting and this looks very good. I have had a quick look at the style, and you have done a good job here
Well done lady
Much love
Michael :)x

Roller coaster of emotions described exceedingly well. Joy through to sorrow. Sounds like a typical day on PnQ

Haha, indeed Michael! Thanks :-) x
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This is a fascinating piece

I find these really hard to do as the structure limits me so much and curtails what I actually wish to convey

You have done an amazing job with this

Craig x