Comments : We will walk together (rondeau)

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    No words for this, just beautiful. Nominated.

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Mark and for nominating my friend :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Beautiful, just beautiful!
    There is no other word in the dictionary for this poem.

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Sg very nice words...although I think "other" is in the dictionary ;)

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I love this, Michael. It's got great rhythm, which takes the reader through to its conclusion. Endless love.

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mr D lovely words :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Stunning Michael! So glad it's nominated :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Oh Michael this is beautifully done and made me cry with happiness.. I hope it's true because you dear deserve some loving :)

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Em :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Mate this is bloody brilliant

    You know I love rhyming poetry and this is right hounslow favorites

    Craig

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      bless you fella :) Thank you

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    Wonderful win!

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mark and for your nomination :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Well deserved win, Michael.

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Judging comment:
    I have fallen in love with the rondeau, and I have fallen in love with Michael’s poem. I vote for this poem to replace traditional wedding vows as this piece says it all! This is what love should be – not promises of a rosy garden, but an acknowledgement that life can be pretty sour a lot of the time – and a promise of seeing those hard times through together. Absolutely wonderful! :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Miss unsuspecting clever Kitty ;)

    Thank you so, so much for all your judging on my poems, and choosing them. Such wonderful comments Kitty, really appreciated. Just like a cat - creeping quietly into the hall of judges, and well done you for taking on the role.
    Thank you again
    Much love
    Michael :)xx

  • 6 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Well done piece, Michael. A deserving win.

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Larry :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    You left me numb with this poem.

    Well done.

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mr D :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Scrittore

    Beautiful

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Scrittore :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Awww, such a beautiful poem, Michael. You nailed the form! Congrats on the win!

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Mel :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Judging Comment - We will walk together (rondeau) by Michael points 7 - I just love a love poem and this is definitely one of the best I've read recently, an upbeat and beautifully written piece and a formed one too which makes it in my eyes all the more superb.

  • 6 years ago

    by Phoenix ¥

    I love this beautiful poem, straight from the heart. Whomever it is written for is extremely lucky to have such a kind, understanding and loving partner x

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Phoenix :)