by Mr. Darcy
Anxiety, a word that creates fear in the bravest of us. There are many ways of dealing with it, but it's a strong emotion that tends to have the upper hand. |
by Hellon
I was really intrigued by your title which drew me in. The random layout of the poem really makes the reader feel the anxieties you are facing. Your sentences seem to come out in and long and short breaths as your mind tries to process each thought. |
that anxieties created a source of focus on a readers mind to read your poem ...indeed its a good poem |