Nelson Mandela (Diamante)

by Michael   Apr 28, 2018


Captive
confined imprisoned
holding detaining incarcerating
enslave oppress release remove
discharging relieving unchaining
self-reliant free
Independence

    report violation
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  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    This is fab Michael ... and I see from the comments that you got caught out with the whole noun thing too! Bloomin things! lol :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    this works, but the word, slack detracts from the overall feel. Let me think...

    self-reliant - you may like this word better?

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mr D for that great word and finally "i'm free" with this one ;)

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Cleverly thought out, Michael. You may want to check the words below as they all need to be adjectives.
    - confined - verb
    - imprisoned - adjective
    - liberty - noun
    - release - noun/verb

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mr D, such a challenge, I think this maybe right ? :)

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