by Sampreeth kotian Apr 28, 2018
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
Twists and turns, are a parcel of life... Surprises pop, as we wade through strife.. As mundane work hours, feel painfully long... A whiff of fresh air, comes wafting along... Differences if any, then take a backseat... Souls that resemble, inevitably meet... Intriguing one deeply, is the disarming ease... where background & distance,to be a barrier cease .. May life remain rosy, our heart seriously hopes, but familiarity breeds contempt, as,time elopes... Pushed, to the brink, life poses questions hard.... To avoid situations unsavoury, one needs to be on guard.... Never to go overboard, is the golden rule... when one is breathing fire, the other must keep thy cool.... respect, care and space to strengthen a bond, do aid....not let with testing time, into memories so distant fade... |
A beautifully expressive piece. You captured the souls’s expanse and heart’s resilience so aptly! ???? |
by Evolve
Never to go aboard is the golden rule |
Forget about what I have penned... I feel you ought to continue from where I ended... the flow of thoughts is incredible !! |
by Evolve
Thanks |
by Mr. Darcy
the unwritten rules, now written... |
"The unwritten rules... now written" Now...That's a wonderful play of words :-) |
by sudhan Hari
Wow...super...keep up the good work!!! |
Thank you Mr Sudhan... your words of encouragement will only spur me to write more often !!! |