great rhyme, rapping out pain and hope.

Perhaps substituting 'wedding' with 'wed' or indeed 'marry' may sound better?

Nice work.

This is a good write. I am sorry if this happened to you. Nobody should play with another’s heart, or well being. So many people take for granted the one thing in front of them that makes them whole, or could make them whole.

It is also sad that we as humans have become so corrupt in our own minds that we cannot see the good, or the passion in life.

Sorry, rambling here ^_^

But this was a good piece! Nice job!