by Ya----Na Apr 30, 2018
category :
Life, society /
about society
Every year, a new religion is born. |
by gumshuda
Good attempt at a sonnet, sg. |
by Michael
Sg |
by Mr. Darcy
Hi Shane, |
by Ya----Na
Thanks Mr Darcy and kitty |
Shane I absolutely love the content of this. I'm far too early in my own sonnet attempts to give you pointers on the meter - but I think it could be improved in places as there are some words that halt the musical flow. Certainly the rhyme scheme and syllable count are spot on. Hopefully one of the experienced sonnet gurus will give you some pointers - it was really helpful to me to get their input :-) x |